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The vast silence
Overtaking my thoughts
Frozen tranquility
Alone in time
Dare I make a sound,
Avoiding being drawn
  Into quiet slumber
A scream pierces the calm,
May have been my own
Struggling to exist it seems
Though struggling not at all
For the silence is sobering
The sobering, A Godsend.
The silence subdues me
Stolen by slumber
  I fade......
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My first writing in many years. Hope it is enjoyed for what it is. Hoping to write more unless there are any abjections.lol

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:iconluverpigs:
omg!!!! wow!!!! omg!!!! *insert open mouth here* wow!!!!

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"I have fought a good fight, i have finished my course, i have kept the faith"
2TIM 4:7
:icondalbalbadil:
Thank you for your "input" :)
:iconinuawesome121:
AHHHHHHHHHHHH! :hug: OMG! that is so kool! So, what were you thinking about when writing this???

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"I asked Jesus how much he loved me, and he streached out his arms and died." (Yeah, I know it is kinda blunt, but it was a poster in my sunday youth class >< I LOVE it)
:icondalbalbadil:
How we tend to try to keep our struggles in life going instead of just finding a peaceful moment to just relax and regain our energies. Peace will find us eventually.
:iconluverpigs:
lol (laugh out loud) ur welome

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"I have fought a good fight, i have finished my course, i have kept the faith"
2TIM 4:7
:iconthe-unknown-goddess:
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR.

you r a good writer also, why is there so many on here? o by the way, im Ariel :)

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friends are angels who lift us to our fet=et when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly.
:icondalbalbadil:
Thank you so very much Ariel. I am glad u liked it. Plan on there being more, at least i hope anyway. :)
:iconinuawesome121:
Ahh. Nice to hear someone actually explain their poem :) (awesome poem) because usually when I ask people say 'I dunno' hehe :boing:

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"I asked Jesus how much he loved me, and he streached out his arms and died." (Yeah, I know it is kinda blunt, but it was a poster in my sunday youth class >< I LOVE it)
:icondalbalbadil:
I usually have a reason when i write, thats why it takes o long, no thought, no poem. And thx again. :)

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